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Pirjo Imprisons Shirley and Attempts to Kill Her

The Hanging Girl

Pirjo’s attempt to eliminate Shirley begins as an apparent invitation into the office and a plan to use exposed electrical wiring. When that approach proves unreliable, Pirjo shifts from an improvised trap to a false offer of work and purification, concealing her intention to remove Shirley behind the Academy’s language of welcome and belonging.

The First Attempt

Pirjo asks Shirley to enter the office first, calculating that if the first shock paralyzes her and she falls, Pirjo will not be able to lift her. She considers fetching a cable kit from the garage and connecting Shirley to it, but doubts whether the improvised arrangement would work: the fuses might blow, or something might short-circuit. Even as she recognizes the plan as insane, she tells herself that Shirley has to go.

In the control room, Pirjo pulls on a rubber glove and prepares to push Shirley’s hand into the exposed junction-box wires. She warns that the electrician has removed the cover plates, presenting the danger as an accident waiting to happen. But Shirley is unimpressed. She explains that the current is direct and the effect is too weak to kill under the circumstances; a fatal result would require her to be unconscious, with positive and negative wires attached to opposite sides of her body. Shirley adds that direct current would otherwise cause only a sting at that time of day, though the rising power might make the setup different when the sun was stronger. She even offers to replace the cover plates because the open boxes are unsafe.

Shirley’s practical knowledge stops Pirjo’s hand. Stunned, Pirjo accepts her offer to screw the cover plates back on and asks how she knows so much. Shirley explains that her father was an electrician and had entertained the family with such information. The attempted electrocution thus turns on a reversal: Pirjo has arranged the room as a trap, but Shirley recognizes its limits and takes control of the immediate danger.

A False Offer of Belonging

With the electrical trap foiled, Pirjo changed tactics. She worried that Shirley might produce convincing proof against her and the Nature Absorption Academy just as Danish police arrived; at the same time, her growing, kicking baby intensified Pirjo’s determination to prevent anything from harming them. She placed her hand on Shirley’s and presented herself as someone who understood the pain of being rejected. The gesture and apparent sympathy were part of a calculated attempt to make Shirley accept a new proposal.

Pirjo suggested that Shirley recruit course members from the Academy’s London office, as Valentina had been assigned to do from Barcelona. The job, she said, would be paid on commission and came with a small apartment—an appealing prospect for someone who would otherwise return to unemployment. But the offer carried a condition: before beginning, Shirley would have to undergo the Academy’s purification process, including a month in isolation devoted to letting nature absorption settle within her. Pirjo framed this confinement as preparation for a place in the inner circle that Shirley had just been refused, turning exclusion into an ostensible route back in.

Shirley’s silence gave Pirjo no assurance that the deception had worked. She scrutinized Shirley’s face for the sequence of reactions she believed could distinguish genuine emotion from calculation, but found it blank. The scene therefore leaves the offer unresolved: Pirjo has replaced a visible electrical danger with a promise that would place Shirley under the Academy’s control, while she still cannot tell whether Shirley is persuaded or resisting.

Confinement and Escalation

By the second day of Shirley’s captivity, Pirjo was measuring the danger not only to her prisoner but to the secrecy of the crime. The house stood several hundred meters from the new timber circle, and Pirjo judged it remote enough that Shirley’s cries could not reach the workmen. But one man had walked toward the house, and the possibility that others might follow made the distance feel less secure. Pirjo estimated that Shirley’s shouting would lose much of its force after four or five days of exhaustion, while death from starvation might take at least twenty days. The gap between those estimates exposed the weakness of the plan: Shirley could remain audible, and potentially discoverable, for far too long.

Pirjo considered quicker ways to kill her, including poisoning her or rendering her unconscious and cutting her wrists, but each seemed to carry a risk of discovery. She worried that Shirley’s body would remain difficult to move, that someone might find it before Pirjo could conceal it, or that Shirley had left incriminating messages in the house. Her original scheme was to let Shirley die from refusing food and water, then break down the door and place the key in her hand so the death might look like suicide. The intended disguise depended on both the body and the scene being found on Pirjo’s terms.

Instead of carrying out that plan immediately, Pirjo went back to the house to turn off the water main behind it. Depriving Shirley of water would hasten her death, while also leaving her less able to extinguish a fire if Pirjo later chose that alternative. Pirjo considered using surgical spirit and a match when the others were away from the Academy, but treated the timing and the danger of leaving evidence as unresolved problems. The water supply became the concrete escalation: after three days, Shirley had run out of reassuring explanations for Pirjo’s absence, and the sudden stop of the tap made her fear that she had been abandoned deliberately. Searching her bag, she also found that the shoes with large buckles, nail scissors, and file were missing; the omissions confirmed her suspicion that she was not meant to leave alive. She connected the threat to Wanda Phinn’s disappearance from the Nature Absorption Academy, though she could not yet know what had happened to Wanda or where she was.

The Mechanics of Entrapment

The sequence makes the danger legible through practical details rather than a single open attack. Exposed wires, a glove, the control-room gauge, a locked house, a water main, and the missing objects in Shirley’s bag each belong to an ordinary working world; Pirjo turns them into parts of a scheme whose success depends on managing what Shirley can touch, drink, and eventually have discovered. The change from electrical current to deprivation also changes the scale of the threat: the first trap is immediate and visible, while the later plan relies on isolation and delay.

That delay exposes a contradiction in Pirjo’s effort to make Shirley disappear without attracting notice. She needs time for the death to look self-inflicted and for the body to be concealed, yet the same interval leaves room for Shirley’s cries to be heard and for someone to approach the house. The Academy’s promise of purification and inclusion supplies a social disguise for exclusion; confinement strips that language down to its consequences. Shirley’s recognition that she is not expected to leave alive marks the point at which the apparent offer of belonging can no longer obscure the physical reality of the threat.

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